About Writing and How to Publish. Cathy Glass
a result of your reader’s comments; only that you listen to what they say and give their opinions serious consideration. Don’t take their criticism personally; it is not you they are criticizing, but your work. So often we are overprotective of our writing – seeing it as an extension of ourselves, as our ‘baby’ – and thereby we miss out on an opportunity to improve it.
I am not going to spend time writing a tome about spelling, punctuation and grammar. This book is not big enough for that and there are thousands of very good books on the subject already, as well as websites that give online advice and tutorials. In the UK, teaching grammar in schools went out of vogue for a whole generation as it was felt it stifled creativity. But, as with many trends in education, attitudes have come full circle and grammar is now being taught in schools again.
Don’t worry if you missed out; you don’t need to know that you are writing in prose, as long as you are, or that an independent clause must contain a subject and predicate, as long as it does. If you read extensively you will absorb good grammar and sentence structure through example. But if you feel your written English isn’t up to the task of writing your story and you seriously want to write, then you will need to set about improving your core skills, as you would before undertaking any new task. All colleges of further education offer day and evening classes in English language, as do distance-learning courses (for example, the Open University). You don’t have to wait until you’ve finished the course to begin writing; you can hone your skills while you are writing your story.
Reading
I can’t emphasize enough the importance of reading, especially the genre in which you wish to write. Not only will reading improve your sentence structure, vocabulary, spelling and language skills, it will also show you what makes a good book – its structure, layout and pacing. If you find a word you don’t know the meaning of while you’re reading then look it up in a dictionary or online. I also suggest you make a note of any interesting or unusual words or phrases you come across to improve the richness of your vocabulary. I love words, so I have a small notepad in which I make a note of any new words or phrases I come across that appeal to me. I’ve had the same notebook for over twenty-five years and some of the early jottings include: ‘diversely opposed’, ‘pragmatism’, ‘a sense of entitlement’ and ‘youthful remembrance’. I may use a variation of these one day, so I keep my little book as an aide-mémoire. Now there’s a neat phrase. If you don’t know the meaning of aide-mémoire then look it up.
Spellchecker
Now a word about computer ‘spellcheckers’. Most computer software includes spelling and grammar checkers. Use them, but with caution. While they are usually good for picking up basic errors (silly spelling mistakes, typing errors, extra spaces, omissions of capital letters, etc.), they are far from foolproof and often make errors of judgement far worse than your own. Here are some examples taken from the first fifty pages of my book Damaged:
‘One of the couples were first-time carers and Jodie should never have been placed with them.’ The spellchecker, not recognizing that in this context the verb needs to be in the plural, not the singular, highlighted were as being incorrect and suggested was as the replacement.
‘Look who’s come to see you, Jodie!’ The spellchecker suggested whose, which is an entirely different word. Who’s is the shortened form of who is or who has, while whose is the possessive form of who.
‘The sound of Jodie talking to herself floated down …’ The spellchecker wanted to use her instead of the reflexive pronoun herself.
‘She dropped to her knees and started thumping her face and head viciously.’ The spellchecker wanted to replace face with the plural faces.
Here are some further examples from my book Another Forgotten Child:
‘I was grateful my children were so understanding …’ The spellchecker, unable to recognize the past continuous verb tense, wanted to replace so understanding with understood.
‘“Come on, dry yourself,” I encouraged.’ The spellchecker, unable to see that yourself was being used as a reflexive pronoun, wanted to replace it with you.
You don’t have to know the grammatical terms, just that what you have written sounds grammatically correct while the spellchecker’s suggestion sounds wrong. English is a very rich language and one of the upshots of this is that the same word or phrase can be used differently or have a nuanced meaning depending on its context. Computers are clever, but not so clever (yet) as to be able to recognize these subtle variations in language, so it highlights your word or phrase as being incorrect and then suggests an alternative based on a literal interpretation. If you have doubts about the accuracy of your spellchecker’s suggestion then err on the side of caution and don’t accept a suggested replacement until you have checked your word or phrase on one of the many English grammar websites or in a grammar book.
Just as you will need to develop a reasonably good standard of English to be able to write your book, so you will also need to be computer literate, unless you are going to ask someone else to type up your work or pay an agency to do it, which is going to be expensive – probably more expensive than buying a personal computer. Although touch typing is a useful skill to have, as it allows you to type quickly, it isn’t essential, and many authors and business people get by with two-finger typing. I taught myself to touch type and I average about eighty words a minute, which is very useful for replying to the many emails I receive, as well as for writing my books. However, as long as your computer and typing skills are sufficient to allow you to produce a word-processing document (in a program such as Microsoft Word) and send it electronically, you don’t have to be a computer geek. Colleges of further education offer day and evening classes in typing and computer skills – for every stage, from absolute beginner to advanced programming. There are also private tutors who will teach you computer skills in your own home, although they don’t come cheap. Likewise, the company that sold you your computer may also offer a service whereby they set it up in your home, connect you to the internet and show you the basics.
I suggest you buy a printer to go with your computer. They are relatively inexpensive and as well as giving you the chance to see your work in print – which can give you a new perspective, as the printed word looks different from the screen version – most printers are also scanners and photocopiers.
The layout of your work is very important when you submit it to a literary agent or publisher, so you will need to follow their guidelines. These can be found on their website or in their entry in writers’ handbooks such as the Writers’ and Artists’ Yearbook. However, while your work is under composition, you can use whatever layout or font suits you. I use the font Arial, in size 12, which is also a standard format for submission. To adjust the font and font size go to the drop-down menu on your toolbar in your word-processing document. The number refers to the size of the characters – the higher the number, the larger the font size. I always work in double-spaced lines, which allows me room to annotate my work on the printed sheet and write in changes. Most agents and publishers will require you to submit your work in double-spaced lines too, even though you will be sending it electronically – by email. Line spacing can also be changed in the drop-down menu on the toolbar in your word-processing